Firstly, a good thesis statement can be made worse by locating it in the wrong place. When placing your argument, avoid putting it in the middle of the paragraph or later in the paper. Make sure it’s either in the very beginning or ideally in the very end of your introductory paragraph. The second way to ensure your thesis statement is good is to be as clear and precise as possible. Refine your thesis as you refine your argument. During the writing process, you might add or remove some points. Make sure to include or exclude them. If it is a general assertion, that is one indication that it is not focused enough. Another tip I have for you is to make your writing as clear as possible. Remove vague words and avoid abstract notions. Unless you’re writing a technical paper, avoid using really specialized vocabulary (and on the contrary avoid colloquialisms).
Poverty is a social ill that no country has so far combated to the end, achieving full success in alleviating penury and making all people in the state happy and satisfied with their income. However, a discussion of poverty is a highly controversial issue constantly connected with a number of peculiarities and intricacies , as being poor is perceived differently in different parts of the world. While in the starving countries of Africa, poverty means having no home, no food, and no clothing on a regular basis, for Europeans, misery is much closer connected with deprivation of excess pleasures and purchases such as expensive devices, expensive clothing, and sophisticated foodstuffs.
“In a sense we’ve come to our nation’s capital to cash a check. When the architects of our republic wrote the magnificent words of the Constitution and the Declaration of Independence, they were signing a promissory note to which every American was to fall heir. This note was a promise that all men, yes, black men as well as white men, would be guaranteed the ‘unalienable Rights’ of ‘Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness.’ It is obvious today that America has defaulted on this promissory note, insofar as her citizens of color are concerned. Instead of honoring this sacred obligation, America has given the Negro people a bad check, a check which has come back marked ‘insufficient funds’.”